Really enjoyed this; the weariness from Daniel and the uncertainty from Cam are spot on. Particularly liked:"Maybe Jackson was always that ruthless and it just got filtered out." and Cam coming to the realisation that nothing's what it seems at the SGC - even his teammates.
The minimal dialogue really works for this piece. Any more conversation would have been forced, I feel, given the circumstances and the characters.
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Date: 2011-08-18 11:36 pm (UTC)Really enjoyed this; the weariness from Daniel and the uncertainty from Cam are spot on. Particularly liked:"Maybe Jackson was always that ruthless and it just got filtered out." and Cam coming to the realisation that nothing's what it seems at the SGC - even his teammates.
The minimal dialogue really works for this piece. Any more conversation would have been forced, I feel, given the circumstances and the characters.